in the book they are scare of a ghost. in the life i am not scare because thear are no kid scarere but some time some kids are scare in life because in hollween they have spare
Limberg - You started to make a good connection to the world around you but I couldn't understand what you meant by "in Halloween they have spare". What could you do to make sure your meaning was clear so I could understand? Also what resources are you going to use to make sure you 1. give the book title and explain what is going on, 2. remember to capitalize, and 3. remember to use periods? We discussed this!
When the reader can't make meaning of what you write, it impacts your grade:
1-2 NS You showed a very limited understanding of the assignment or no awareness of your choices in your work. The assignment showed little imagination, has little to no literary features and/or support.
Limberg - You started to make a good connection to the world around you but I couldn't understand what you meant by "in Halloween they have spare". What could you do to make sure your meaning was clear so I could understand? Also what resources are you going to use to make sure you 1. give the book title and explain what is going on, 2. remember to capitalize, and 3. remember to use periods? We discussed this!
ReplyDeleteWhen the reader can't make meaning of what you write, it impacts your grade:
1-2 NS You showed a very limited understanding of the assignment or no awareness of your choices in your work. The assignment showed little imagination, has little to no literary features and/or support.